Stop It

• Artist: ilinkzeldi
• Description: It just sort of popped into my head.
• Date: 10/20/2008
• Tags: stop

Stop this, stop it all,
why do we act like this, we condescend on others.
Isn't the life the God gave us important enough?
We still ignore others, pick and prod relentlessly, bringing them to tears.
What does it accomplish? I have yet to find out.
I know it sounds like a cliche or some dumb after school special,
but its not, its the horror I go through everyday,
I'm not perfect, nobody is, and I do things wrong,
but for once in my life give me the ability to move along.

Comments

[Chishio Tenma]

true line 6 makes it sound almost like your just ranting.

[Tsuki Kurai]

mischiefwolf is right. yep, everything he said.

[Mischiefwolf]

You need to delete line six it sounds stupid. And also this si a good point you just need to word it differently.

[samantha38]

it good and so true! no one prefect