MY DEAR PRINCESS

• Artist: Messy berna5
• Description: oh!! my princess,I love you as I love my self
• Date: 10/27/2008
• Tags: dear princess

Oh! Who are you,
who visit in my dream at night,
who are you who make me smile,
who are you who laugh at me,
who are you who protect me,

Oh! my DEAR Princess!!
I'm your prince,
who visit you at night,
laugh at you
make you smile when your sad,
protect you...
You are my shining PRINCESS
who makes beat my heart so fast.
who make my work done
who make me more brave,when I hear your voice.....

Your my angel came from heaven...
Your my no.1 fan

SO,please my princess,
love me as I love you[

Oh!!! I'm so happy to hear it my prince,
I will accept your love,
cause I know I will be happy in your side
I will be safe,
I will laugh as I can
There will no more tears when I'am be with you.
I will be more fortunate
And the most is I Love You!!!!
promise me my prince,you make me happy!!

Promise my DEAR Princess.

Comments

[AncientChronicles]

hmm..... there are a few grammar mistakes:
stanza 2, line 5 : your ---> you're
last line : more brave --> braver
stanza 5, line 6: I'am be --> I'm

sry if i offended anyone. i just thought i should help out a little... ><

[tksunshine93]

ummmmmm kinda weird needs a bit more work
but i give u a 3 for creativity