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Some roses are planted in a sea of begonias and peonies,
But sometimes a seed strays from the lush garden
And is instead rooted in acidic and sour soul,
Though it is always a rose.
This rose, however, does not know her own reflection,
Where beauty should be admired and praised
Hideousness and deformity are held close as if
They were truth, and not the lies they are.
Because – yes – she is a rose, coming into full bloom,
A time of her greatest beauty is at hand
Though do not try to tell the rose this,
As she will only p***k at you with her thorns.
Her thorns are her line of defense against those
Ugly weeds surrounding her, who try and tell
Her she is not a rose and is one of them,
And mostly she believes them, to belong.
Only a rose, hearty and determined, could survive
The pounding rains and dizzying hot summer days,
Only a rose could not only survive but flourish
Becoming even more beautiful, if possible.
One day she’ll understand what it means to be a rose
And on that day she’ll stand, tall and proud,
Ready to change her fate to something more
Appropriate for a strong and precious rose.
- by [broken-butterfly] |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/31/2008 |
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- Title: The Garden
- Artist: [broken-butterfly]
- Description: Wrote this piece for my sister on her birthday.
- Date: 10/31/2008
- Tags: garden poem
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Ms Make Me Smile - 11/07/2008
- the first guys very mean commenting
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- misslovelyness - 11/01/2008
- I'm sure your sister really enjoyed this. Your metaphor is very good. Good job!
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- Collector Chris - 11/01/2008
- ..... boring..... -_-
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