A Cold Mistress

• Artist: Lionhearted Sam
• Description: A poem about the wrath and dangerous beauty of winter.
• Date: 11/03/2008
• Tags: cold mistress

Frost dappled hills blot the horizon,
running up and down the scenery like
a rolling wave pon the sea.
Drifting, drifting from afar,
a frosted breath gracing the countryside,
stopping only to glare pon a helpless figure,
make them weary and sleep, eternally.

Comments

[Devilyne_McBaine]

i agree with the person below me its a bit bland srry

[RedWhiteBlack]

You definitely didn't need to abbreviate "upon," as your poem isn't so much lyrical as it is open form.

However, it has good bleak imagery. 3/5