You Were So Beautiful

• Artist: Nox_Eulalie
• Description: Another little something I wrote, except after camp.
  
  This is inspired by characters from an RP. The speaker of this poem is Andrei, a conjoined twin whose brother has never been conscious and is essentially a parasite.
  
  Andrei ends up convincing his lover Lupin to bring him to an alleyway surgeon...And this is the result.
• Date: 11/04/2008
• Tags: were beautiful twins freakshow

I. Under.

You were beautiful.
Beautiful...
I never noticed that when I was
alive.

You may have thought you looked wild.
Scary.
But you weren't.
You weren't.
You were so beautiful...

II. Before & After.

You kissed me good luck instead of goodbye.
You left me in the alleyway.
I wanted you to.
I didn't want you to see.
See my insides.
See what bound me to this parasite of flesh.

So I sent you away.
Sent you to buy sweets and cakes
that we could share after the operation.
You were so happy when you left...
But so nervous...

And when you came back
you looked so sad.
So devastated.
You clung to by body
and my soul clung to you.

Comments

[Peace_Love_Icecream]

Omg, this was... Beautiful... I love your use of words, very nice 5/5
One of teh best biggrin

[wishbone theory]

I have to say it was really well written. Very good. 4/5. :] (Mostly because it grasped me.)