Remember

• Artist: LC Barwick
• Description: :D Vote it plz.
• Date: 11/05/2008
• Tags: remember brandon lcbarwick dark breakup

.. good intentions laced on acid tongues
are pointless from razor blade lips
the consisitancy of pure hearts die
when beats are skipped
in this shattered world
where whispers are to undo
it's easy to forget what used to mean the most to you
REMEMBER that night
REMEMBER that kiss
REMEMBER that look
REMEMBER these lips
REMEMBER those words
REMEMBER flying free
REMEMBER that touch
REMEMBER who you used to be And even though this life's a play no one's who they say to be
Someday when the curtain calls you'll remember me.

Comments

[angel of vanessa90]

that is a moving poem. i incurage you to keep writing poems, and that is from a proffesional!

[yuni wulf -- Alpha Angel]

vary nice, Ill give it a 5. and if you like, check out my poem, its my first one in the arena. its called LIFE (Love Is For Everyone). I may be adding more, Ill try adding some of my darker poems, you might like those ones better Im thinking xD, Just look for my name

[mexicantacos2003]

this is good stuff man
i like it
(maybe it would be better spoken: just a thought)
...
...
cuz you could like yell as if you were angry that ("she" wink forgot
but this has feelings that hit your core and move you
(i dont know if that makes sense but oh well)
5

[tksunshine93]

Wow....very moving, you have a talent

[yashigirl]

I remember this one. You sent it to me in August...< smile