The Sun

• Artist: bluebird943
• Description: Today I went outside during recess since the library was closed. I sat down and looked at the sun, and I picked up a piece of paper and a pencil and started writing. It's not my best work for sure, but it's simple and really short, which is different from my other work, so I wondered if it's any good.
• Date: 11/07/2008
• Tags: white shining sunset

Ah, sun
You warm and inspire me
You are like a king
Sitting on your throne of clouds
Shining down upon your subjects
Pure, holy whiteness
Up in the sky
Your love stirs passion in my heart
And when you hide
My heart breaks in two
At the end of your reign
You cry tears of red
That drop one by one
Into the sea

Comments

[TheDreamShake]

wow, an actual quality poem here on gaia XD i really like it ^_^ good use of abstract writing. kudos

[portland_girl]

I like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!











































yay!