Roses are Red

• Artist: Kamikaze Artist
• Description: Only one of the poems I sorta got off of some banner. But I loved it so much I had to put it up in my series of three Roses are Red poems. I've been told that my work is wonderful, but this is actually kind of tacky. Anyway, I just want you guys to comment and tell me what you think.
  
  ~Ketsueki Omamori(Biblical name)
• Date: 11/10/2008
• Tags: roses

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
My rose is white,
And it's bleeding for you.

My mind is pink,
My life is blue,
I'm more than you think,
And so are you.

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
My heart is dead,
And it's because of you.

Comments

[Kechero-TheForsakenRose]

Hmmm... I like it. You used a little bit too much color, it distracts the reader, but it's still very good.

[Kamikaze Artist]

Aww thanks. I love writing poetry. Simply because someone already destroyed my heart.

[GriffonLord]

I think the whole color scheme was a nice touch, but it seems to make the poem rather than enhance the words.

[Mika Demon Sealer]

im so happy that someone realized that the white rose is for death. this is a really good poem and i love how you redid the roses are red vilets are blue one to this