yours for always

• Artist: Scene-Aaron
• Description: i wrote this for a girl i have a chrush on... i gave it to her and she said..."it's the cutest thing i have EVER read. And it was brave of you to give it to me. but i'm not ready for a relationship right now."
  thats the story... hope you enjoy...
• Date: 11/14/2008
• Tags: love crush lust

every time i see you
my heart stops beating
time freezes, i will stare
and get lost in your eyes

my heart aches to have yours
and be yours for always and ever
to be close you yours when i hold you
to race when our lips touch

i love to see you smile
it's something i would love to make you do
over and over and over again
i would hate to see you hurt

i will do what ever it takes
to make you mine
i can weave my fingers through yours
i can kiss you and never draw back

this is a crush i cant control
i want you to want me
to have the chance to make you
love me and me love you

Comments

[DasSnoot]

Nice story you added to it. The poem sounded like rap-ballad lyrics, which are nice. You should make this into a ballad and add music. Ha ha. I had a similar story, but it didnt end quite like yours... (worse)

[Sparkly Tits]

awww~ look at mine XD its like yours, i read mine to a guy and he said"good for you, but i liked it" lawl...i dont know if i should be happy or sad after that XD

[kikanawj]

Oh! I wish a guy would write me one of those! I think ur awesome for writing her this. I'm sure a guy like you will someday sweep a girl off her feet! if only more guys like you were out there... Nice poem! 5/5!

[CannibalWizards]

Nice.

[Kimono325]

This is precious! I adore it! It's the kinda thing I'd put to music. It'd be an awesome song!

[xJeriROCKSx]

that is so sweet! <3

[mattm1990]

lolz u are brave. I can see that u put a lot of thought into it.