I am From

• Artist: Dark Karakuri
• Description: This a writing assignment for my English class.
  My teacher says no one can write a perfect poem or story and gave me a 13 out of 15 points on it... here it is.
• Date: 11/16/2008
• Tags: from shadows imagination pressure possibilities

I am from the shadows,
hiding,
casted away.
I am from the world of pure imagination,
always thinking,
never sleeping.
I am from the depths of the ocean,
pitch black,
never knowing where to go or what to do.
I am from the gray hairs and wrinkles of business people,
constantly working, never time for family.
I am from the grave,
dead but still alive.
I am from the earth,
raining when things become to dark,
trembling like earthquakes under pressure,
erupting when life comes to a boil.
But most of all,
I am from art.
Having endless possibilities.

Comments

[Nyclone]

Your teacher is a good judge, but your grade was shy five points to many. It works well.

[Xeon Kamishi]

I don't think your teacher has the right to make a statment such as that, perfection(when it comes to poetry) is in the eye of the beholder, so it can be perfect if the person that reads it believes it to be, and I think this is a really well done poem.

[xXxAir and DarknessxXx]

That is excellent....it really speaks to me....i can connect with the writing

[L o l i t a Jikiningyou]

Awwwe, I really like the poem!!
That is really really good.
:]

[Vagabond Vanguard]

I think this is really good.