Broken Wings& a Shredded Heart

• Artist: Sapphire_Honuka_73
• Description: I think this poem almost everyone can relate to so pleaz tell me wat you think:3
• Date: 11/19/2008
• Tags: broken wings sredded

BROKEN WINGS AND A SHREDDED HEART
wen he looks my way
with love reflecting in his eyes
my heart skips a beat
my eyes start to sparkle
my face flushes bright pink
my smile gets wider
and i'm flying high into the clouds
but then i look again and see
he's not looking at me
he's looking at my best friend
standing at my side
i start to fall
deep into the darkness
and into the fiery depths of hell
it's like this every day
but i still love him
even though i know he will never feel the same
and will forever love my friend
i start to hate her
but i know that this is wrong
it's not her fault
she doesn't even know
so i go through each day
with broken wings and a shredded heart

Comments

[xXsecret_artistXx]

i especially love the last line. ^^

[mitsuki5561]

you're right i can relate to it but seriously I don't understand the form of this poem. I'm so used to rhymes. It seems like so many ppl on here don't rhyme well.
this one is better than the last one i commented though. If you are putting these up in the chronilogical order in which you made them then you are getting better. 4 stars.

[Jeyrin]

aww! I know that feeling >.<

[Ubiquitous Androgyny]

alotta ppl can relate to this, its nice ^^

[Devious Itachi 666]

This is a very lovely poem. Anyone can relate to this and see exactly what the character is going through. The vivid title is the real eye-catcher. Thank you for this awesome poem! This is the theme for anyone going through that kind of time.

[sam soccer003]

i liked it and kept up wit it, fleshy flower just cant comprehend the meaning and i feel the same way all the time wit my bff and this guy

[AngelicDemonic73]

this is a good poem 5/5