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He loves me he loves me not
The petals of this flower fall
They fall all the way down
Just a little question
Just a little thought
He loves me he loves me not
This might be a game to others
But it is not for me
It gives me hope
It gives me a lot
He loves me He loves me not
The petals are now piling up
I have only so few
With one last pluck I see
He loves me
- by hiddentearsofmine |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/24/2008 |
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- Title: He loves Me He loves me not
- Artist: hiddentearsofmine
- Description: My poem It is one of the first ones I made. I hope you like. ^.^
- Date: 11/24/2008
- Tags: loves loves
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Tracker Ninja - 04/02/2009
- This would look and flow easier if you made stanzas of four and the repeated "He loves me he loves me not" was as its own line. Other than that it's a good poem
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- th3 vamp1re bat - 02/07/2009
- ok that wuz byfar the best poem i've read today infinity out of 5
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- iPokeYooh - 01/13/2009
- Omg soooooooo goood!!!!!! did u really make it? 900000/5
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- R1ku101 - 01/08/2009
- OMGEEE!! dats one of da best poems ive evur heard 100000000/5!! keep up da good work!!
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