Boy on the Train

• Artist: mbourg99
• Description: i notice Him everyday
  looking out the wIndow
  he turns to Look at the next stop
  then he turns back
  I notIced that I Keep staring
  hE noticed too
  he smIled once
  I had To blush
  
• Date: 11/26/2008
• Tags: train romance window

Sigh, it is fictional. I wish I had a romantic life like that though, lol. Can you see the secret message?
Hi. You like it?

Comments

[mbourg99]

Thank you for the comment. I was just bored, so it's not really refined. Thank you!

[Ocean and Atlantic]

1. The poem could use work, 2. You mixed up the definition and the poem, 3. Capitalization plz?