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Watching you cry on a summer’s day
The sun glittering in your tears
I wonder why you’re crying
Why here, why today
Was it because of the milkmaid?
Or maybe the barber too
No I think it was your uncle
Who crawled into bed with you
- by larna-sasuke |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: Watching you cry
- Artist: larna-sasuke
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Description:
its a bad poem but you could tell me where and how to make it better
>_< thanks - Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: watching summers
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Comments (2 Comments)
- shadyeclipse - 11/29/2008
- good good.
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- fireshadowkatdemon - 11/29/2008
- That's wonderful. Great emotion.
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