Your love is a lie

• Artist: Yami Yufakai
• Description: What it feels like to be cheated on.....
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: your love

i saw u with him last night and to think i thought our love was so bright, i know ur love is a lie so dont even try, was i just bait.... i feel like a dead weight, is the word love to u just a lie i want u to know i realy did cry and know i feel im going to die soo now i say ............ good bye and may god forgive u and rise u to the heavens in the sky

Comments

[kage kokoro 10]

Dang its been so long since i lost this account XD, my "yami yufakai" era was a good one

[un3dead3spirit3]

='[ i know how it feels,,, good poem...5/5

[anna ginobili]

that is an awesome one! smile

[Alley_Attraction]

it unexplainable . . . touched ...

[Magnifique_un]

I can feel your pain through this poem. Even though this has never happened to me. The aura or the feeling of the poem is so strong it's beautiful. The tital also really goes with the poem. But I think you should change the description. To something more like That night i saw you with him, or something like Love ment nothing to you did it? You dont really explain HOW you are dieing INSIDE.. Your mostly just saying it caused you pain. Besides that I really do like this poem smile

[TeyaWorriorPrincess]

that waz beautiful and toatally how i felt

[psyche_da_mike]

wow... so inspiring