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Journal portruding my lap
Memories ceasing to exist
Only through my eyes
My tale can be recalled
Indistinct with its soft spoken words
Poetic injustice pulling at my hair
In this straightjacket feeling
Vulnerability becomes my nemesis
Halting advances on my fractured body
Refraining to inform my abused brain
The shields have fallen
As I cower inside
Trembling to the ground
Weaknesses etched into my skin
Eyes become blurred
Opinions become misjudged
While hate influences the best of us
Succumbed with clouded eyes
Gone are the important things
While locked in peripheral vision
I followed the footsteps through my journal
Reminiscing the time
Once in stasis, now alive
Back to the beginning
Continuing to find, mere thoughts, no ending
- by Mecca Against Reality |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: Protégé
- Artist: Mecca Against Reality
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Description:
Rate/Comment fairly.
Thank you.
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: protg
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Comments (5 Comments)
- hey girl hey XD - 12/09/2008
- You're really good! biggrin
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- XxChildesh_GamesxX - 12/02/2008
- really really good..5/5
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- This Accident - 12/01/2008
- YAYS!!! You wrote more. I always am pleased with your poems. They have the essence to them that not everyone will understand, but they are gorgeous, and clearly have feelings to them. Poetry without feeling is meaningless! Good job! ^_^ 5.
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- iBrightScales - 11/30/2008
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I understand the meaning perfectly.
I love it.
Wonderful, once again!!
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- the_ashen_child - 11/30/2008
- no bad, i don't really understand it but the imagery is great!!!
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