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Beauty
She walks with the wolves
In her dazzling dress as the world looks on and watches.
The light in her hair is like strains of gold
To me she is priceless.
As the stars look down and the wolves start to howl
She starts to walk faster and faster.
She approaches with her beautiful smile
My lips start to tremble for iv never seen such a beauty.
When she arrives ill be waiting
Till then she will always be in my dreams.
- by Dark HawkS |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/04/2008 |
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- Title: Beauty
- Artist: Dark HawkS
- Description: i wrote this for my girl friend so please comment of how you think it is
- Date: 12/04/2008
- Tags: beauty
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Comments (5 Comments)
- SuperHeroBlankeyy - 11/06/2009
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1. i think the fact that you wrote her a poem is beautiful =) i wish i had a bf that did that
2. there are some flaws but its acceptable.
3. its sooo sweet of you to write a peom for herrr biggrin - Report As Spam
- ForeverNForever - 06/02/2009
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your gf is gonna love i can just feel the passion and love in this unique poem give it to her
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- Unloved_Tween - 12/24/2008
- awww, that so sweet dude! ur gf's gonna luv u even more, way 2 go wink
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- vardo5 - 12/07/2008
- i like the cadence at the beginning.
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- xVoltaire - 12/05/2008
- You were right, the ending wan't that bad...5 i reacon
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