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You took my heart
I let you
You acted like you cared
But thats all it was: an act
I told the truth and you acted
You made me want to cry
And I still trusted you
I trusted you above all others
I trusted you not to break it
But you did
Now I have no heart
I feel nothing but the hole in my chest
I cried
You broke my heart and now I cannot trust you!
- by mara love queen |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/09/2008 |
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- Title: My heart!
- Artist: mara love queen
- Description: This is just a poem to get out how some girls trust guys with their heart and only they get hurt. When you trust someone you expect them not to break you. but that is what happens sometimes. I was feeling depressive when i wrote this so please let me know what you think!
- Date: 12/09/2008
- Tags: heart
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Comments (7 Comments)
- threeDQT - 10/30/2009
- i really really like it!!
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- DramaDork372 - 03/12/2009
- i agree with katiejuby. dude, you're a jerk. those girls deserved better than you. great job on the poem
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- xXsecret_artistXx - 02/10/2009
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i agree with the first comment.
ps- (to guy below) if your relationships keep going like the first two, you are going to be known as a total jerk - Report As Spam
- King Exseada - 12/11/2008
- i've only gone through two break ups, but both times they weren't heart broken. my first one was because i made a girl think i really loved her. also i was cheat'n on my gf. and i broke up with my gf because we didn't talk much. or do anything together for to long.
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- --the k i l l e r g r i n - 12/10/2008
- That was amazing. Reminds me of what happened to me. Great job! ^-^
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- xXxX_Toxic_death_XxXx - 12/10/2008
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i love it its so true most girl don't trust guys cuz they are scared to
guys just need to show girls they can trust them
good job i love it ^^
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