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Edward x Bella
Your pale skin glistens in the sun
" Edward " I say
" How can you ever be? "
You suddenly disappear
I start to feel the tears
And here you are again
You kiss my cheekYou crept up beside me and held my hand
whispered " don't be afraid ".
now there we lay in the sand
shaking, I trace your arm
" I won't do you any harm "
Your golden eyes stare at me
The pain is gone.
I want to be with you forever.
But I could easily die.
But alas, Edward..
I won't say goodbye.
- by Madame Ravissant |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/10/2008 |
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- Title: Edward Cullen x Bella Swan
- Artist: Madame Ravissant
- Description: It kinda sucks... But I like it.
- Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: edward cullen bella swan
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Comments (6 Comments)
- MalevolentChocolate - 01/13/2010
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You're right... it does kinda suck.
Not to be harsh or anything, but I absolutely *hate* it when people write poetry about books. It seems a bit redundant. In addition, you might want to consider adding rhythm and equal spacing, as well as using proper grammar. - Report As Spam
- Gracie Jane - 12/11/2008
- yea this is really good. it is alot better than my twilight poem.
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- Robert At The Disco - 12/11/2008
- =] really cute. 5/5 *Hugz*
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- Angry gothicbabe - 12/10/2008
- i love it as i am a twilight fan and i think edward cullen is cuite
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- Julia Dream - 12/10/2008
- This poem needs more sparkles in order to be suitable "Twilight" fan-work.
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