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He looks at me, but doesn't see me.
We bump into eachother, but he doesn't feel me.
He walks by me everyday,but he doesn't notice me.
No matter what I do.
So, do you think he remembers me, from last year?
- by IIHello FascinationII |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Am I A Ghost?
- Artist: IIHello FascinationII
- Description: I know, it's short but, this is how I feel about a guy I like. Wego to the same school. We had the same science class last year, and used to be some-what friends...but now, he doesn't even speak to me.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: ghost
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Comments (3 Comments)
- CherryPie09 - 08/15/2010
- it short but its one of my favorites. biggrin
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- Killa-Keyblade Master- - 05/02/2009
- If I spelled it right, Haiku's are usually about 5 lines, so no worries. Based off what I have seen, this has nothing wrong with it. I'm not to big of a fan of Haiku's, but this one seems like everything is in place, so 5/5. Good job, and try to make them a little longer! razz
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- JuJuBee24 - 12/13/2008
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pretty good :]
Go check out my poems just added a new one tell me what you think :] - Report As Spam
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