If You Truly Loved Me...

• Artist: lI_Ghost_lI
• Description: At first my friend savie wrote this.... I edited it. I give all credit to Savie. Thank you.
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: truly loved

( she says....) If u truly loved me...
Would u cry if my last breath was today
would u understand if I had to leave
If u truly loved me...
If u were lost on a unknown island and u had to choose one person...would it be me
If I was standing in the rain...would u let me in
If u truly love me...
If a hug is what I needed would ur arms open to me
would u be there when I need someone to listen
If u truly loved me...

(I say...) If I truly loved you...
I would cry if you took your last breathe today
I would understand if you had to leave
If I truly loved you...
I would choose you to be with me if I were on an unknown island
I admit that if you were in the rain I wouldn't let you in, I would come outside with you in the rain.
If I truly loved you...
My arms would be forever open for you
I would forever listen to you
If I truly loved you...

Comments

[Typo Negativ]

I got this same poem in a Forward from my ex. I think, if you didn't copy it, then your friend Savie did.

[SceneTeenRainbowRaver]

Awww this is really good. I love this because msot people can't reach this level of depth and emotion, even in real life. It almost makes me cry when i read things like this because then i can know there are people out there who know how to be... well i guess there are no words to describe it.
Great job, definite 5/5!