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Heart's a flutter,
like a dove,
flying to
my one true love.
Beating faster
hands do touch.
Pull away,
look down and blush.
Steady tempo,
in her arms,
sheltering
from all that harms
Loving her
with all my heart
hoping that
we'll never part.
- by Triforceon |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: Rhythm of Love
- Artist: Triforceon
- Description: This is perhaps my all time favorite love poem of mine. It's not entirely deep though, one of my more shallow works. It just makes me happy when I read it. It... well... makes my heat flutter.
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: rhythm love cheesy rhyme heart
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Jasmine Callisto - 01/11/2009
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nice. 5/5
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- swords tip - 12/24/2008
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this makes me wanna hold my girlfriend and never let go
nice man! - Report As Spam
- We Have A Winnar - 12/20/2008
- I do enjoy succinctity in poetry. Fine work.
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- kenken1296 - 12/15/2008
- nice
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- tksunshine93 - 12/14/2008
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Short and sweet....
Very well written despite it's length
Good job - Report As Spam