A Better Life

• Artist: x-OverKill-x
• Description: A poem I wrote for my friend who got her heart broken...
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: better life hevan heven

Your voice was the soundtrack of my summers
Your eyes were the brightest of all colors
But now our relationship is fading, and your features are too
Now Ill I see is someone who makes me blue
So daily you make me cry a river
You left my heart empty and withered
Because of you all I want to is die
And go on to a better life that awaity above the sky

~COPYWRITE BRADY KERKHOFF~

Comments

[Je t_aime Ran]

Damn..compare to mose guys ur a damn good writer ^^

[kashumaru_mizume]

wow. It reminds me of my past when me and my bf were on rocky roads and it seemed fated that we'd loose eachother. I'm glad I was able to fix our relationship. I feel for the person who was hurt. People can be cruel and others just don't get what a relationship truely is. Very nice. i give it a 5. Um try fixing the errors in the poem though k? Once again great job. ^ ~