Things i never got to say.

• Artist: Mark Of The Wild
• Description: To the girl of my dreams that i never got the chance to tell her some of the things that made me fall for her.
• Date: 12/14/2008
• Tags: things never

Things in life never made sense,
till i met you.
The fact that life itself is so short,
gives people a reason to live.

I had another reason to live,
you.
The love i knew and hold in my heart,
will carry on to the next life and beyond.

Words i have said to you are true,
but there are things left unsaid.

I love the way you make me feel,
I love the way you make everyday worth wild,
I love the fact that you can calm anyone down with a simple touch,
and i love the fact that you care so much.

These words i haven't said through words,
are now spoken,
but sometimes i feel it has become to late.

Comments

[Mark Of The Wild]

Haha, Thanks. I don't mind if it sounds depressing really. It's a mix between confusion, happiness and depression.

[xretarded_muffinsx]

halie shush your mouth plz. its rlly good i thinks its sweet. its not sad it rlly sweet and nice. if she read that she'd think the same ^^

[Halie895]

why is everything here so freakin' depressing?! write a happy poem! the world is sad enough already!

[Psychotic_Ares93]

Nice Ty, there are things missing. Your point is well taken but it seems like you left things out. Example; the ending. go beyond what there is in them mind, and you'll have it made.

[Vincent_Iscariot_Key]

Good overall, a little revisions, but overall it's good.