love or no love

• Artist: hott_emokid
• Description: a poem that i wrote for my emotions to a girl and she liked it so i thought u guys would like it to and keep in mind when your reading it that this is my first poem i ever wrote out side of school. and if you say it fast it sounds like a song
• Date: 12/19/2008
• Tags: love love

As ii sit and look up at the moon
I cry myself a little tune

I wonder where you are
I wonder how u are

you are just o so sweet
And every night for u i weep

And now i lay down my head
I start to thinnk its time for bed

Then suddenly it hits me
Could me and you ever be

Then it dawns on
We couldnt ever be

So i turn back into my pillow
And start to weep and cry and bellow

I look around and start to wonder
I think a little bit and still ponder

Is it you or is it me
It obviously me cant you see

It all started when i looked up at the moon
And creid myself a little tune

That little thing that came so big
I cant believe it really did

So now we no its because of me
Im the reason we can never be

We can take the chance and try to see
If we could ever be

But if we dont take the chance
We may never see

Comments

[ilki]

lol. This is cute but come on i like it when there are actual words not letters. r u sure it takes that long to spell are and you...well poetry has no rules it just has to flow. It did in fact flow. Nice emotions and awesome for a first poem...and awesome as a poem in general. Keep improving! ^_^