I Promise

• Artist: Emma11042
• Description: I was really into the poetry feeling at that time so don't be too harsh. This is my first poem so I hope u like it!
• Date: 12/19/2008
• Tags: promise

I promise i'll take you far far away,
where me and you will dance all day,
we'll listen to the birds and swim with the waves,
I promise to take you, I promise,
Just hold my hand and we'll explore,
Through the magical world we'll soar,
We'll run through the grass,
We'll sink in the past,
So don't be scared, I promise

Comments

[Kokoaz]

I think that was pretty cute. I rated it a 5.

[Corny Muffinz]

i looove your poem!!