LoVe or hAte

• Artist: Hei Tora
• Description: my lyrics
• Date: 12/19/2008
• Tags: life

Now tell me how or why i got to go
i ran out the room but low key i want to kno
do i wanna die is it cuz im the 1 to blame or am i goin insane
is it cuz i try to hard
i just wanna run far...ther away
even tho im free i still think im a slave
all u did was shave away ...why is what they say
i cant die
i wanna strive
if its gang colors im not see
but when i speak i do it lyrically
i dont talk i bleed
i hog the limelight cuz its about me
metaphorically im the king
i dont die
im the fire
any 1 else is a liar
nowadays all germs speak of gangs
but know i have the sanitizer that'll extinguish your fame
By me/ Shain Quinn

Comments

[Jacky la belle]

it has a kind of rhythem to it. almost like a blues. speeling would help, but then again it sounds better this way. maybe smile

[such a silly woman]

Hi i would like to say this is good but... spelling out the words and numbers would make it better(punctuation is key) i'm looking for comments on my work take a look if you like. =)