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Tonight is the night it will end.
Everything will end…the laughter, the love, the music.
Because tonight is my last chance to be who I truly am; and I am nobody.
Empty. Even with you by my side, I am empty. This ‘love’ cannot fill me.
This music falls on deaf ears. I cannot hear the meaning; I cannot dance to what I cannot hear.
Nothing. Even when the soft laughter ends, there is no echo, no trace that is was authentic.
So I say farewell to you, as this is my final night…
The sweet, clear water washes over my face and warps the crisp moon. Sweet Luna is my only witness
I can almost hear her sorrowful song…as she cries out the story of a lonely death.
The bubbles form delicately from my mouth; silvery and fragile.
The water turns bitter as it forces itself into my lungs; raping my throat.
I feel the liquid slowly fill my body, dragging me down to the bottom.
The moon becomes but light laughter, tickling the far off surface.
The water fills my emptiness, the moon cries tears only I can hear, and her melancholy laughter echoes in my mind…
As I
Finally
Close
My
Eyes…
And welcome my ever-lasting night.
- by MopMustache |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/19/2008 |
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- Title: The Emptiness Can Be Filled
- Artist: MopMustache
- Description: Well, I'm not usually such a depressing person, but this piece nearly wrote itself. Please comment. Constructive criticism is the best you know! ^^
- Date: 12/19/2008
- Tags: emptiness filled night death
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Comments (4 Comments)
- trix_intrepid - 04/26/2009
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love it!pure awesomeness
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- TeH cUdDLeH - 03/16/2009
- that was very good i could actuelly fell what it was like u did a good jobe at describing it (cool pic it fits ur poem)
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- Ris Bara - 01/16/2009
- Wow! Beautiful words... a beautiful death
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- nickichick15 - 12/22/2008
- i like this pice. its really good but i didnt know u had such a dark side. btw merry christmass!!! XD u should be a writer.
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