abused

• Artist: Mommys lil sweetheart
• Description:
• Date: 12/23/2008
• Tags: abused

"MOMY MOMY" i scream "has he hurt you to" i feel a sting across my face as my fater hits me "shut up now the neighbors will here!" i try to run but he catches me i wake up he glares at me "someone help" i say "no one can here stupid" he says i feel an insten strike and a twist i faint agian and never come back but now im in a peaceful place

Comments

[Obsidian Guild Serpent]

Err... I see where you're going with this, but please try to improve the grammar and spelling. According to your punctuation, the whole thing is two sentences, which is obviously isn't. 2/5