Alone

• Artist: Be4Death
• Description: Second poem. My third one will probaly be up next week depending on how I feel about spending the little money I have. Oh yeah! I got the idea to right this after watching an AMV about Sasuke Uchiha, and also watching the episode of Naruto(my favorite anime) of when Sasuke was remebering his childhood.
• Date: 12/29/2008
• Tags: alone naruto

Tell me how it feels
To be all alone during meals
Nobody to teach you, from wrong or right
Nobody in sight
Day after day, talking to yourself
Pretending it's not oneself
Playing like nothing's wrong
You have to be strong

Comments

[haku is cheesy]

The whole "loneliness" topic is over done. Write about something more difficult.

[musicbyme]

oh and i love to hear more from you so keep on writing.

[musicbyme]

yeahh 1st comment. good poem. a bit sad and thats why i love keeping and making more friends. if i dont hav any friends i would just die because i cannot be alone.just feeling like that makes me really really lonely razz um well ofcourse but u get the point. i give you a 4