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Her tears swell up
She can't hold it in
He broke her down
She believed in him
why isn't he there
to hold her tight
she feels rejected and hurt inside
but she'll bottle it up and hide it deep
behind her mask
behind her lies
and she'll keep on holding it down inside
till she can find a better place for it to hide
so she holds her head up high
the next day,
with a smile,
and goes on
until she sees him and realizes he doesn't see
that she loves him so deeply
he makes a comment about another girl
she can't take it and the world goes into a whirl
she runs to the bathroom
and dies inside
he just can't see her love for him
she must push it back in cause he'll never see
through the mask she wears so easily
he'll only realize once shes moved away
that he should have made that good friend stay
he should have told her right then and there
that he loves each and every freckle and hair
but she'll never know that she made the cut
but she'll always have that bottle no matter what
- by RainingMusicDawn |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/30/2008 |
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- Title: bottled up
- Artist: RainingMusicDawn
- Description: I wrote this really late (1 in da morning) cause I write best at this time. I can really make my feelings flow. I've never written a poem in a third person's view. Technically it's about me but I'm not gonna label it. It's so common. I bet it happens to everyone at least once in their life. Enjoy. And it'd b nice if u commented back. I'm trying to get feedback on my poems. Also read my pitch black...it's my favorite! :D
- Date: 12/30/2008
- Tags: bottled alone inside tears mask
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Comments (7 Comments)
- angel41791 - 07/29/2009
- This is really good. the flow is nice, and to top it off it puts a pang in my heart because I can relate. When you know no matter what you do he won't love you. And getting over him while he's by your side is impossible, the most sensible choice is to run. But don't make it the only reason for leaving.
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- VampBlood28 - 02/18/2009
- Wow! Awesome poem! I totally LOVE it!!! ^_^
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- Zerosplit - 01/13/2009
- Very good, I know your pain.
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- michicachan999 - 01/09/2009
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wow.
this describes absolutely perfectly what I feel at the moment and what's going on.
this is great. - Report As Spam
- BloodyBlackAbyss - 01/01/2009
- This is one of the best i have read today. Keep it up. I seem to write better when i am depressed. Check out mine and see for your self. I love it.
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- TiasRain - 12/31/2008
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This is amazing, I absolutely love it. I feel like this everyday, but I could never make it sound so beautiful
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- BAMA_BABE202 - 12/30/2008
- i love it that is exactly how i feel that was just amazing im speechless
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