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Down to My final breath
I'm lost I must confess
I can't breath
I can't see
Blind as night
and dead with fright
No more life in me
Its way to dark out here
I can't move
I can't speak
The world is dieing
People think I'm lying
- by XAngelicShadowXX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/02/2009 |
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- Title: Closing in
- Artist: XAngelicShadowXX
- Description: simple...
- Date: 01/02/2009
- Tags: closing world dying breath
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- Mario the Davidic Hero - 08/02/2010
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very awesome! u should write more! (comment on some of mines if u want)
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- BlackDream12 - 03/19/2010
- Awesome! I like this poem.
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- Irishgirl98 - 03/09/2009
- wow.... that was REALLY good! like seriously! u rock!
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- alex is king123 - 01/04/2009
- do i get gold for adding a comment
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