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im in a haunted house
I walked in to the black hallway
" come my dear come to my voice" i hear.
i follow the voice she sounds like my mother.
i open the final door, that came in my sight.
i try to open it slowly.
And the creak gives me fear.
eek
In the middle of the floor
i see a woman in front of me.
" come to me my dear, i miss you" she continued.
I confronted her, with cold chill coming down my spine.
When i got close, She grabbed my arms.
" now my dear you will be mine!" she screamed.
SHe ripped my skin, i began to wail.
I look into her eyes as her skin became pale.
I twist and turned with the fright.
I opened my eyes with a loud gasp.
I jerked up knowing it was just my past.
I lay back down with no fear.
while she stared back at me, with another soul hers......
(srry for the mispellin hope you enjoy)
- by Trinityblood1045 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/03/2009 |
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- Title: death dream
- Artist: Trinityblood1045
- Description: is death a dream or real?
- Date: 01/03/2009
- Tags: death dream
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Comments (5 Comments)
- queen siva - 03/11/2009
- i like. 5/5
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- onlinepunk - 01/08/2009
- ehhh, kinda more of a story, but nice
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- XxNot Your_Average GirlxX - 01/04/2009
- beautiful yet freaking scary lol i imagined the lady 0.o
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- Trinityblood1045 - 01/03/2009
- thank you i was sort of rushing XD
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- The Judged Book - 01/03/2009
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Wow, that was really good.
Some grammatical errors (sorry I'm picky about that, even with my own writing.) But it's really good none the less. I love stuff like this that have underlying messages within the story.
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