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Somehow
She's all alone
In a crowded room
all around is alcohol
and drugs, too
How did she get here?
she can't remember
Some guy grabs her waist
and asks for her number
This party is outta control
The music's too loud
She can't hear herself
She's got to get out
Pushing
Screaming
"I can't make it anymore.
I can't fall
for if I do
I might never get off the floor
I gotta get out of this place
Please let me out of this place"
Right now
He hears them yell
He sees them fight
Looks down
This is no different
than other nights
How'd they get this way?
He doesn't remember
His dad grabs a knife
goes right at his wife
This man's outta control
The screams are too loud
He can't hear himself
He's gotta get out
Running
Screaming
"I can't take it anymore
I can't stop
For if I do
I might not make it out the door
I hope I make it out of this place
Damn I might not get out of this place"
She comes home again
betrayed by her so called boyfriend
Punches the mirror
It shatters
She starts crying as
she picks up the glass
and puts it to her wrists
life don't matter
All she can think is
bleeding
screaming
"I can't do this anymore
I can't lie
for if I do
I'll just suffer even more
forever I'm leaving this place
Saying no goodbyes to this place
- by Skipping_Evil_Zebra |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/04/2009 |
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- Title: Out of This Place.
- Artist: Skipping_Evil_Zebra
- Description: Uhhh well I was pretty depressed. Ha and I always write when I'm depressed... and I was trying to make myself feel better by thinking about how much worse my life could be. And well it worked. and BAM here's these lyrics.. :] I thought they were okay so I thought I'd ask all you Gaians what you thought! Rate/comment plox. ♥
- Date: 01/04/2009
- Tags: place
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Ol Bitey Boots - 03/07/2009
- I do the same thing when I'm down. Normally not lyrical though lol. It should be emphasized to everyone who reads this though that some people actually have lives like this. The poem is sad because the references are realistic situations. But indeed it is written very well. 5/5. Excellent writing and ability to apply poetry to such specific situations.
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- Asa Nisi Mese - 01/05/2009
- Wow, that was incredible!
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- Vampires Wews- - 01/05/2009
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The most amazing thing ive ever seen,ur kinda my inspiration now.My lifes a train right now
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- Sparkly Tits - 01/04/2009
- read mines?
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- Sparkly Tits - 01/04/2009
- wow...sad...
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