In Hell's Dark Depths

• Artist: cooll666725
• Description: I went to church yesterday, and it inspired me to write about the souls that are burning and pained in hell. This poem was not the best outcome, but it's very close to a good freestyle poem. I was slightly off on the beat at one part. See if you can find it.
• Date: 01/05/2009
• Tags: hells dark depths poetry savior

Souls are burning in the dark
They light the world with every spark
Why inside we see they lay
Only they will die one day

For they will burn
In hell’s depths
In order to pay
All their debts
Their hearts are hot
Their skin is cold
They are not living
Their dead under stone
In pain they lay
In hell’s dark depths
Waiting till they
Get a new chance

They are alive only in spirit
They will not live to see or hear it
What they want they will never receive
Because they have chosen death over me

For I have come to save them all
Though they had rejected my humble call
Therefore, unto them I do say
You must burn; Just Burn and wait

For they will burn
In hell’s depths
In order to pay
All their debts
Their hearts are hot
Their skin is cold
They are not living
Their dead under stone
In pain they lay
In hell’s dark depths
Waiting till they
Get a new chance

Understand I do love you all
You all are unique and you all have a call
you that are rejected and left to be denied
By the only creature who can burn your eternal hide

You still are mine I want you to be saved
Therefore you’ll get a second chance if you wait
Wait and burn in the depths of hell
Wait and burn until you hear the trumpet call

No fun will there be
No fun will you have
Not a soul you will see
That isn’t burning and past
Everyone there is dead and feels pain, burning
They all will be read and have a second chance at burning
So wait till I come you might make it out yet
If you just burn down in hell’s depths

For they will burn
In hell’s depths
In order to pay
All their debts
Their hearts are hot
Their skin is cold
They are not living
Their dead under stone
In pain they lay
In hell’s dark depths
Waiting till they
Get a new chance

Comments

[Rygaen Yuui]

Hell's Dark Depths is full of despair.
I want to say I felt it in my gut while reading it.

[Christian_Vendrasyl]

Man, I love your titles! I can feel death on it. Inspires me to create a new hero for my custom warcraft 3 map. 4/5

[tiakat333]

pretty good, way to use proper grammar and spelling! it's a bit cliche, i've read a whole lot of poems on gaia about death though. but that's just my bias. 4/5