love is a game for suicidals

• Artist: loverboy8888
• Description: i think ive realy tried to convey the tradgedie of love lost to the harsh conditions of outside influence and confliction and i might have hit the perverbeal nail on the head
• Date: 01/06/2009
• Tags: love game

and when the game of love becomes your vice

well the devil roles the dice

then all that is good curls and dies

and you are left baron desolate ,destroyed, empty in your lovers eyes

so as you pass through highs and lows only you realize that the real you is lost to the devils hand and your deadly vice

amour becomes second only to abhor

and you are left as her eye sore

Comments

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Aside from your various spelling errors, nice job. But the errors bring it down. 2/5.