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Lonely tear at midnight,
Drowning sorrowfully.
Wanting to be expressive,
Wanting to be free.
Lonely tear at midnight,
Trails down my cheek.
Reminicient of my life,
After it reached its peak.
Lonely tear at midnight,
Glitters in the light.
Soon to be wiped away,
Forever gone from sight.
- Title: Lonely Tear at Midnight
- Artist: iMute Red
- Description: Written on a whim
- Date: 01/08/2009
- Tags: lonely tear midnight
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Ericy123 - 09/08/2011
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cool
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- aL ycious - 01/26/2009
- Your poem is pretty clever, though I feel like I'm reading prose rather than poetry. Particularly when I read the lines like, "Reminicient of my life, After it reached its peak" - the actual choice of words isn't all that lyrical or poetic. But, again, the idea behind the poem is clever. Keep working at it.
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- Shanra the Dragon Bard - 01/13/2009
- It's very well done my dear friend. The timber of the verses works well together.
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- iMute Red - 01/09/2009
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Thank you so much.
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- Requin Kelekona - 01/09/2009
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*hugs*
I love it. It is very nicely written and the emotion of lifes passage is perfectly conveyed. - Report As Spam
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