Whirlpool

• Artist: Keiko_Shadow Chuckles
• Description: This is a poetry piece I plan to hand into my English teacher. It is the words to my concrete poem. The picture is of a whirlpool. I was wondering how it is and how you would rate it. It took me about the last 20 minutes of class (including thinking) and well this is what I came up with. I hope you like it! =D
• Date: 01/15/2009
• Tags: whirlpool depression love heartbroken

Whirling down toward the darkness,
not bothering at all 'to reaching up.
Letting it take you to its depth,
leaving those around you,
who are watching you - amazed.
All because of that one person,
you feel alone.
You're still whirling down a whirl pool,
unknown of the ones around.