jagged

• Artist: loverboy8888
• Description: holding together is harder than you think i have this simple question
• Date: 01/18/2009
• Tags: jagged

disfigured is the lie that binds what should be a broken man

revenge of the sadness that to him has become so bland it keeps him tethered

to lonely ground forgotten lifeless and dead

for where he stood in happiness now he stands to die forsaken to be crucified

tis this i ask rendered twain by a simple question who is privy to judge

is it you

or is it

I

whos responseability is it to see under his skin and condem him of his sins

Comments

[loverboy8888]

thank you very much it seems these things come to me in visions so i know what you meen

[Marionette_Mentation]

this poem is probably the most thought provoking poem i have ever read in my life. i feel an emotion that isn't easily described. not sure what to think but i deffinitly think this poem is beyond unique! comment back plz ^.^

[loverboy8888]

thank you but i am talking about earthly damnation by the masses and not by god but thank you

[Moonlight_Maiden123]

its very deep, i like it. but all sins will be confronted on judgement day to to clear that up ^^