mean people

• Artist: the_melvin_man
• Description: to the bullies at my school
• Date: 01/18/2009
• Tags: mean people

you are mean to me
you expect me to be the person you want me to be
you should see
i am a boy who writs poems
i am a boy who sings songs
i am a boy who dances to his music
i am a boy who cooks with his family
i am the boy that you bully
you are mean to me
you expect me to be the person you want me to be
you should see

Comments

[kewl-sasuke-kun]

i really like it, but i think it should be longer.

[QueenOfKeepers]

great point to this. but you should try forming a poem with better word choice. try to make it flow better. the i am part is great, its the rest that doesn't work.