My Heart

• Artist: Nalah Hawkings
• Description: inspiration from Sharon Creech's Hate that cat. jake's teacher tells him to write a poem based off of My------------------ is like a --------------. so I tried it and this is what i came up with.
  
  
• Date: 01/20/2009
• Tags: heart love friends religion boats

My Heart is like a boat that can hold many ppl, That boat has many wings. All these wings house the evol of Jesus, The north wing is for family , You know those ppl that you can't get get rid of , the south wing has fluctuating population. This wing is for friends ppl who u can't trust at all but u still care for them. the west wing is for music you know that stuff that can make u feel any kinda way with its melodies, rythms, and lyrics, the east wing is were the bible and prayer is. weither it's prayer for family, friends, me, or a coplete stranger it comes from the heart. No from my heart. My heart is like a boat that can hold many ppl.

Comments

[Marionette_Mentation]

i think it is a good idea but the structure needs a bit of work... comment back plz ^.^

[King Exseada]

well it has a good idea, it needs to be a little more like a poem. i wish i could recall some verses, but i can't. prayer is a good way to show that you care about people. i think i need to pray more. i wish i prayed for my friends.