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My sun has gone away
refusing to shine another day
im stuck in this darkness
without the amazing brightness
anywhere in my life
i might as well grab a knife
I know life isnt fair
but i really just dont care
I know the world is full of sadness
but its also full of madness
maybe i should just hide
but its to late ive already tried
I dont know what to do
i hopee i can just get through
i know i have to be strong
but why does this take so long
i know i can do it
itll just take some time
and after that time
the happyness will be all mine
- by -Hoshiko-Tila |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/21/2009 |
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- Title: Dark Sunshine
- Artist: -Hoshiko-Tila
- Description: i wrote this a few years ago when i was going through a tough time with life and im just looking for some feed back from people so i know where i can improve.
- Date: 01/21/2009
- Tags: dark sunshine
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Comments (2 Comments)
- InsertCrayonHere - 07/22/2009
- i love it, its really good, i am a song writter myself/sing (not famous lol) but i am in my citys quire.....i have won 5tallent shows in my life from singing a song i wrote and i like it... and some times it does lose its rhythm but thats okay!!!
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- philelectricguitar - 01/22/2009
- That's pretty awesome! The only problem I can really find, though, is that during some parts of the song, it loses a little rhythm, because of a few words that could be taken out. Besides that, it's great!
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