Doubt

• Artist: emeraldpuppy9
• Description: I was reading this book and it was saying how everyone was being affected by doubt and I just got inspired to write this X]
  enjoy and give honest ratings/comments =]
• Date: 02/15/2009
• Tags: doubt poison uncertain lies unwary

Doubt is a poison
That slowly creeps into your thoughts
Uncertainty and disbelief spread throughout
Slyly invading your heart and mind
Relationships severed,
Bonds broken and torn apart
Separated are friends,
Disintegrated are lovers,
Divided are families
Unwary and paranoid,
Unsure of all,
What they knew,
Seems a lie
It is a needle that pricks and pries,
A thorn digging deep,
Claws scratching endless gashes,
A knife opening bloody wounds,
A rapier that kills

Comments

[ParadoX_Revolution_XlV]

wonderful writing! ^-^

[tehrandumhobo]

too many good poems. keep going xD

[shadow_of_the_heart19]

*claps* Your really great at this!!!!!

[Phinagin2000]

wow, amazing! very true..

[Aniratak]

So pretty and so true.

[anime_freak_kouga]

I like it ^_^

[zhongwen_shitsumeishi]

LOL I love your metaphors xD Ahh All your poems are excellent =DD