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• Artist: faux_fur_rabbit
• Description:
• Date: 02/16/2009
• Tags: untitled

Life doesn't make sense
But nothing really does
So why do we try to find
A reason for everything
When we never can

There may be a reason
For most everything
But some things
Can't simply be explained
With the snap of a finger
Or a flip of a wrist

Life doesn't work that way ^3^

Comments

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

Fits the basic premise of a poem. Plain and lacks any sort of vivid spark. Decent rhyme scheme, but livid wording leads the poem into a sort of bland feel. I understand what you are trying to say, but I do not agree with it. (comment changed to give actual feedback) I apologize for the barbaric and nonconstructive comment I left earlier. I am not changing my score, as I still feel as if this is a weak poem, but whatever...