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My heart is but a dark abyss,
No day nor light be found.
The knife that's left so many scars,
I've left upon the blood stained ground.
The tears of woe are left behind
With those who have in life found peace,
And in this dark and dreary night
This heart beat soon shall finally cease.
Happiness has long been gone,
Warm blood no longer fills my veins.
And all these pressing, morbid thoughts
Shall cease to be with all my pains.
The drop from here seems long and steep,
The constant flow a pressing cold.
The memories of this scene come forth,
In forgotten times from years of old.
Sweet death thy lips are drawing near,
To relieve my darkened mind.
At the bottom of this river deep,
I leave my burdened soul behind.
- Title: Sweet Death
- Artist: cutter121
- Description: Something I wrote a while back and figured I'd post to see what people thought of it. please rate and comment. : )
- Date: 02/23/2009
- Tags: sweet death
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Comments (4 Comments)
- lovealwaysadri - 04/02/2010
- this brings back memories......... :l real deep
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- angelmonkey10 V2 - 04/11/2009
- I really like this. Could you look me up and read some of mine? People tell me that I write things like this...
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- King of Trash - 02/25/2009
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This is possibly the best poem I haver ever read.
This is a gothic art master piece. 10/5. - Report As Spam
- polkadotbby - 02/24/2009
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R u goth or sumpin
your poem is really good though
Its deep!!!
<3 Polkadotbby - Report As Spam