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Stars shining bright
You called me that night
You said we need to talk
I'm thinking of you as i walk....
I saw you in the park
Alone in the dark
You're tears were falling
While we were talking....
The stars were fading
And the rain began pouring
I hear the words goodbye
As you left me by....
- by granddark94 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/02/2009 |
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- Title: goodbye",
- Artist: granddark94
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Description:
it's a simple poem about...
break up......
if you read the poem...
you will know the explanation.... - Date: 03/02/2009
- Tags: goodbye
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Comments (5 Comments)
- ll-lil_tom-ll - 03/08/2009
- i like it.....
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- granddark94 - 03/05/2009
- tnx for commenting.....
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- TheLonlyKing - 03/04/2009
- I know the feelings of every word in this poem. I just wish i'v never felt them
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- UC Poika - 03/04/2009
- somehow wound up at the wrong page when I commented. Sorry!
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- UC Poika - 03/04/2009
- I know how hard it is to rhyme like that. I did it for years. And I was very proud of what I had done Now I'm embarrassed. Those who rhyme before meaning are rhymesters not poets in my oppinion. Which is just an oppinion. Keep writing. Anyone who can rhyme like that is sure to be able to articulate what's on his heart w/o so much rhyme. May your Diety bless you.
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