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Take a look at your life,
look in your hand, is that a knife?
Is it really worth it to end it here,
with random chances so far so near?
Tomorrow comes, you could be rich,
but end it now, with your body in a ditch?
Take a look at your life,
in your hand is that a knife?
I'm here to say there's so much more,
then all this wasted time and poor.
Tomorrow comes and what is left,
it's up to you, can you pass the test?
Take a look at your life,
do you beleive me now?
Or do you regret having waited one minute,
it is your choice what to do, but you must beleive in it!
I won't stop you, but I ask that you think,
is it really worth it, to end it in a blink?
Take a look at your life,
have you made your choice?
Look me in the eye and then the mirror,
is this what you want, to die so inferior?
Life is great, play by play,
you can end it all, or be happy some day.
Take a look at your life,
do you beleive me now?
Or are you blind to it all,
can you see all of them in the crowd?
We all have shame, a bit of dispair,
but we push on, someday we'll make it there.
If you end it now, you prove nothing at all,
except that you failed, and don't care if you fall.
Is that really what you want, I bet not,
don't do it to spite us, just remember it is your choice,
so say it loud with all your voice!
- by Code Vermillion |
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- | Submitted on 03/10/2009 |
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- Title: As in life, as in death!
- Artist: Code Vermillion
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Description:
Two people I know have gotten a little suicidal, plus I hate that stuff anyway, so I got bored and made this. It's basically my way of saying, if your gonna kill yourself, do it already and quite whining, but make sure, that is what you really want.
So yea, let me know what you guys think ^^
p.s. Comments are appreciated ^^ - Date: 03/10/2009
- Tags: life death
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Fraziek - 03/10/2009
- Ok, so I think this is amazing...I have had struggles in my life where i almost ended it. I'm glad that I didn't now and i can relate to ur poem.....this sounds weird but I'm having a poetry slam for my class and I was wondering if I could use this...plz comment me or pm and let me know if I can...thx
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