Wish i may wish i might

• Artist: Candii_Courtney
• Description: I stab my heart and hope to die
  wish i may and wish i might
  stay this way for all my life
  
  
  if you vote please comment...i like critisem...i just cant spell it..>.>
• Date: 03/13/2009
• Tags: wish wish might

I stab my heart and hope to die
wish i may and wish i might
stay this way for all my life

Wish i fought and wish i might
have this wish i wish tonight
that when i stab into my heart
will i be free of all of this light

Once a wish of great might
Now all these things are freed tonight

peace in mind
my heart gone

wish again wish tight
have this wish i wish tonight

I stab my heart and hope to die
wish i see and wish i might
be freed of all this light tonight

wish i may and wish i might
silently freed, drawn into night

Comments

[BatzLove]

awwww!!! i loved this!! it was really moving!! 5/5

[nikkyp533]

i love it, especially repeating, thats a factor in certain poems. It gives it a sort of music or feeling, and i loved it! 5/5

[NoelNevermore]

why does this keep reminding me of suicide? lmao
good job though
full credit
(in other words 5/5 ^_^ }

[MademoiselleHarmonie]

Rymes~

[Boy_Livin_In_Sin]

u added a lot of i wish i may i wis i might... u should say more different things in ur poems

[so sedated]

its really good