A Beautiful Lie

• Artist: Hio Fukahi
• Description: This is a poem I had to write for school, and I got my inspiration from the 'relationship' problems I'm having. Pretty much this guy is trying to ask me out, and I'm not interested. I'll probably let him down a bit easier than the narrator of this poem, though. ^^;
  
  Also, I'm a short-story author mostly, so poetry isn't my forte. If you could, please leave a comment telling me how I could make this better. Thank you for reading, and I hope you enjoy!
• Date: 03/15/2009
• Tags: beautiful liar love life

"If time fell away,
Stopping all time and decay..."
I look to you,
Wary and confused.
For should you utter
A single romantic mutter,
The heaven will rain
Water filled with hate and pain.
You do not care
But for anything fine or fair.
What then, brings you near,
Trying for my heart as if a treasure dear?
You are not my love,
Nor are you my life,
For I shall work until the day that I die
Because Love is a simple and Beautiful Lie.

Comments

[Kgirl07]

Go Hio! nice poem, you could add a bit of rhythm...
still, it's good

[cosmic_grl_102]

wellz i for one lyk it, others may not becush it doesn't make tooo much sence! cush at first i thought teh guy wusn't showing any emotion towards JOO! not teh other way around O.o