Hollow's Silence [edited]

• Artist: KittyWaffles-of Do0o0oM-
• Description: Just something i sribbled down one night when it hit me. also first poem im putting on here.
• Date: 03/19/2009
• Tags: hollows silence dark

From where I stand I see a light,
Brilliant shining in your darkened night
A flickering moment that passes slow
Engulfing us in a world so lost in whole
They speak lies that speak truths of falsehood
Forever in the eternal night of hollow’s silence

The dead rest in a sleepless grace
That can only be matched in elegant masquerades
Forever they dance hidden from all unknown
Taking steps and matching breaths
In the silence of a lost truth

There, I can feel it near,
The darkness is closing in around me!
Engulfing me; separating me from you-
In the abyss of silence’s time

Alas! I scream into the longing night, as I am taken abroad!
Shall I be lost forever?
Will you forget me now I am of them?
The ones who speak lies of lies of truth,
Forever to be forgotten in a flickering moment of light
A dance to be taken into eternity with a single dying breath

The darkness has embraced me with its essence
And now I bleed a steady flow of black -
May I as will, take the light you once saw and devour it
Then, have you forget me and all that I am

Comments

[Idiosyncratic Quirk]

This is complex. Each prose is going off on it's own tangent but it's all related. The last two lines, however carry a lot of weight and vampire thing took it down a notch. 4/5.